My visual poem is about dogs. I chose dogs because dogs are loyal and each are special. Each one is different weather its on the outside or inside. They may look the same but their behavior is different. Dogs are an animal that are different than any other. Each animal is different and I chose dogs because of the loyalty they show to their owners. A bond between an owner and is special.
When editing, I used the kens burns effect to zoom in on a picture. This effect affected it by showing how a dog is listening to its owner. The other effects i used didn't affect my visual poem as much as I wanted it to do. I didn't use that many effects because I didn't have enough time too get it all done but at least I finished. Im happy I finished on time. It could be better but thats okay.
I think my visual poem could have turned out better. I could have used more effects and I could have gotten more b-roll. I don't have a video in it either so I think I could have gotten a video. I tried to get video but that didn't work out very well. But thats okay. I finished and at least I tried. I think the the results I got are fine.
Great job showing pictures of your dogs eating and lying down.
ReplyDeleteI think I saw stretched out picture and muffled voice.
Great job explaining how much you love dogs.
Loved your B-roll
ReplyDeleteYou should work on your voice overs
Like your topic so original it was awesome
I like your poem.
ReplyDeleteBalance your audio.
I like your effects.
I liked your topic about something people want to know about
ReplyDeleteIt was a little to load
Your pictures were good
I like how you showed dogs going on about their day to day lives
ReplyDeleteYour audio is very high
I like the words you used in your poem
1. I like the pictures
ReplyDelete2. More videos and the a-roll are loud
3. Your writing piece is good
Great shots, really creative!
ReplyDeleteSome photos were stretched, and the audio had a lot of background noise.
Nice expression!
•I liked the topic
ReplyDelete•Some of the pictures were stretched
•The b-roll was pretty cool
It was really well written
ReplyDeleteYou could have read your poem over and a little bit more b-roll
and i really love your topic
Your poem was well written
ReplyDeleteIts was a little too loud
I like the pictures of the dogs
I really like how you got many different dogs and not just one
ReplyDeletemaybe you could talk clearer in your voice overs
I really like how you were talking about dogs as if they were a human
I liked the voice overs you did
ReplyDeleteSome pictures were stretched
Some of the pictures though were really nice, like the one where the dog was laying on the bed
Good job doing the voice over
ReplyDeleteThere is a sound in the background and there is no videos (It seems like it would be easy)
The dogs were quite cute
Are all of those YOUR dogs?!?!? HOW MANY DO YOU HAVE!?!?!?!?!??!
ReplyDeleteThe sound quality was too loud...
That's some great rhyming! I really liked it! :)
Good b-roll
ReplyDeleteYou should add more video
Really good voice-overs
nice rhyme scheme
ReplyDeletetalked to close to the mic use more videos
nice pictures of your dogs and nice effects
I love your VO.
ReplyDeletea little to loud and there was ONLY pics
nice description of dogs
I like all of the pictures of dogs you got
ReplyDeleteyou stretched some photos
I also liked the way you said your poem
I liked some of your B-roll they were very good shots
ReplyDeleteSome B-roll shots were stretched out and it looked a little funny
The writing was really good I liked the writing of your poem
Good diversity in the dog breeds
ReplyDeletenot enough video
Like the voice overs
I liked your dogs! They are so cute!
ReplyDeleteI would have taken the dogs outside or just different.
I loved they way you spoke and described the pictures with you words.
your audio was really good
ReplyDeletesome photos were stretched the wrong way
other photos were really good and natural
I liked how you spoke the poem slowly so we could understand it and the emotion that you put in.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you could do better is hide the way that you transformed some of the pics to make it fit.
I like all the different b-roll that you had of the dogs they were so cute!
Nice rhymes
ReplyDeletesome are stretched
I like how you say they are a friend